Blog Post Introductions: 5 Baited Hooks to Reel in Your Readers [Guest Post]

Ali Luke

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This is a guest post from David Masters.

Your blog readers have the attention span of a goldfish. No, really.

A third of people browsing the web will abandon a web page in under five seconds if it’s still loading.

And research shows that attention spans are now as short as nine seconds – the same as that of a goldfish (a century ago, the average adult had an attention span of 20 minutes).

In other words, you’ve only got a few seconds to hook your readers with your blog posts. Otherwise they’ll go elsewhere for their internet fix.

A reader clicks a link to read your blog posts because your headline grabbed them. Your opening paragraph, also known as a hook, has to keep hold of this hard-won attention. The aim of your hook is to arouse curiosity and keep your readers’ eyes glued to the screen.

Let’s take a look at five powerful (and baited) hooks you can use to reel in your readers.

1. Diagnose a Malady

Your blog posts help readers solve problems, right? You help them with something they’re stuck with. That’s true of most blogs, at least, because being helpful is how you get readers.

So, open your blog post with the problem you’re about to address. Don’t be shy. State it outright. By doing this, you’re showing empathy. Immediately your readers think: “This person gets me, I want to find out how they can help.” You’ve got them hooked.

To make your hook as powerful as possible, ask yourself:

  • What does this problem look and feel like?
  • How does it impact their lives? What pain does it cause?
  • How did they end up with this problem?

Answering these questions will give you a vivid, compelling hook.

2. Spin a Yarn

You hear the words “once upon a time”, and your ears prick up. Our brains are wired to enjoy and listen out for stories. That’s why Americans spend over $10 billion a year going to the cinema.

When you begin your post with a story, go immediately to story’s heart: conflict. Where’s the tension in the story you’re telling? Open with that.

3. Quote Someone Wise

“I’ve compiled a book from the Internet. It’s a book of quotations attributed to the wrong people.” – Jerry Seinfeld

Jokes aside, quotations are a powerful hook. There’s something about seeing a quote that signals things are about to get interesting. I think part of this is because reading quotations is like over-hearing a conversation. You’re getting the inside scoop on the latest gossip.

Quotes also act as social proof. When you quote someone your readers know and like – be it Socrates, Lady Gaga or Daffy Duck – their like for that person rubs off on your blog post.

4. Surprise!

Everyone loves novelty. Coming across something new activates the pleasure centers in the brain. So surprises always get our attention. They’ll get your readers’ attention too.

You can surprise your readers by:

  • Contradicting common knowledge.
  • Admitting something about yourself that few people know.
  • Disagreeing with someone famous (for example, an A-list blogger in your niche).
  • Using an unusual or shocking metaphor.
  • Citing a statistic or fact that seems unlikely.

5. Ride the Hot Topics Wagon

An easy win when writing hooks is grab something that’s already at the front of your readers’ minds. To use this hook, write you’re opening line on something you know is occupying their attention.

This could be:

  • A national or international news story that’s made a big splash.
  • A national festival or holiday.
  • The current date. Pretty much every day of the year has something associated with it. There’s even a National Bugs Bunny Day.

Topical hooks are obviously time limited, but they’re powerful while they last. And they’re a great way of coming up with new ideas for your blog.

The Common Link Between All Great Hooks

Writing attention grabbing hooks takes practice, and an eye for what arouses curiosity. There’s no formula that will always work, and the best hooks often break the mold of what’s been done before.

That said, all good hooks have one thing in common: They focus on the reader. Their aim is to pull in the reader, not show off the skills or opinions of the writer.

Keep your readers in mind, and every hook you write will be baited.


Bio: David Masters is a freelance blogger and ebook writer. Learn how to hook every reader from page one is his book, The Wounded Sentence.


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8 Responses to “Blog Post Introductions: 5 Baited Hooks to Reel in Your Readers [Guest Post]”

  • Ryan Biddulph

    Hi David,

    Love your tips. Story telling rings true with me. My fave posts are yarn spinning posts, and the popular posts on my blog are almost always stories I’m recounting from my life.

    People thrive on other folks’ stories, or experiences. With my new blog I’m only sharing my experiences, combined with insights helping you to become a better blogging. Finding analogies, and sharing lessons I’m learning while traveling the world resonates with my audience.

    As noted, $10 billion spent going to the movies is nothing to sneeze at. Stories will pretty much always be popular as long as humans are around to listen in and enjoy them.

    Many of us are tucked to bed as kids listening to a story, if not nightly, at least a few times each week. My parents would read me a story sometimes to lull me to sleep, which I loved. Many still associate that pleasant feeling with seeing/reading/listening to a good story….and hey, who doesn’t love a good movie, right?

    Simply tell stories through your posts and you’ll never lack for an audience…and you’ll also hook readers immediately.

    Thanks for the share David and Ali. I’ll tweet it 😉


  • David Masters

    Thanks Akshay. It’s better to think in terms of hooks than introductions. Your first sentence *must* lead you reader to continue to the second sentence. The second sentence must pull them into the third, and so in.

    Other than the headline, it’s the most important part of your blog post. While you can have fun with it, it’s best to take it very seriously.

  • Akshay Hallur

    Hi David, according to me keeping introduction lengthy is useless. Keeping the introduction short and sweet, and proper use of bold, italics, etc. Captures readers’ attention at the very first moment.

    If the intro is boring Ilike to start the intro like.

    Here goes the boring intro…

    Nice post, got some ideas about catchy intros. 😀

  • David Masters

    Thanks Raspal. Loading times and headlines are important too. And short paragraphs are vital. Another good tip is to increase the font size for your first paragraph.

  • Raspal Seni

    Hi David,

    Nice advice. Nowadays, the 5 seconds has been shortened to 2 seconds. I read this at some blogs and heard it in webinars too. So, I made my main blog load under one second.

    There’s another tip I read which says if you have short 2-3 line paragraphs at the stat of you post, more people are likely to read the post. They don’t like long paragraphs at the start of your post.

    I like 1 and 2. Long long ago definitely makes the ears stand and gets us curious to listen to the whole story. Making our post like a story is a great art and trick.

    And, not to forget the importance of great headlines.

  • David Masters

    Thanks Renard, glad you found it helpful.

  • Barang Bayi

    I only have 3~5 sec for wait the site is completely download. Otherwise, I say “Goodbye”

  • Renard Moreau

    [ Smiles ] This is great advice on how to increase the traffic towards our blogs.

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